Diary Of Katie (A BABV Story)
Chapter 1
First Day Of School
Hi! My name is Katie! I just moved to Build-A-Bearville to a town called Bear Boulevard. My dad just got transferred here. I really miss my friends, but I always keep in touch with them every day. I was kind of popular at my old school, but all of that is gone. I hope I can make friends at my new school, Bear University.
I woke up at six o’clock to get ready for school. My mom told me to always get ready at six. “Ughh, first day of school. One of the worst days of a girls’ life.” I said. “Now, what should I wear?” I looked at my blue top and jeans. I thought it was too boring. Then, I looked at my pink top and jean skirt. I thought it was kind of too “girly”. Then, I picked up my butterfly jeans and purple sparkle top. I thought it was so cute. So, I wore it. My phone started playing Sneaker Night by Vanessa Hudgens. It was a text message from my best friend, Michelle. She said, “hey katie! what’s up? are you ready for school yet?” I answered, “hey michelle! yeah. i hope i can make a lot of friends at bear university, or i can just be friendless.” I walked to the kitchen and I saw my mom about to make breakfast. “Good morning Katie! What do you want for breakfast?,” said my mom. “Ahh…. I’ll just have a apple,” I said.
“Are you sure Katie?”
“Yeah, I’m sure.”
I went to the bathroom and brushed my teeth and brushed my hair. I went to my room and got my bookbag. “I’m going to the bus stop now. Bye Mom! Bye Dad!” I said as I walked out the door. “Ok, where is the bus stop for Bus #9?” I saw some kids at a stop sign. “Maybe they can help me.” I asked this girl with a sparkle shirt and sparkle jeans. “Hello! Is this the bus stop for Bus #9?” I said. “Uhh…. yeah.” said the girl.
“Hi! I’m Katie! I’m new to Bear Univeristy. Want to be friends?”
“Look, I’m the most popular girl in school. I don’t make friends with newbies, except if there cool. By the way, I’m Allyson.”
“Oh, you’re the “popular” type. What! I can be cool! I was kind of popular at my old school.”
“Well, I’m “really” popular. And “kind of” popular people are not cool. Also, I don’t talk to newbies.”
“Fine.” I was almost in tears. But I didn’t want anyone to see my cry like a baby, esspecially Allyson. I saw the bus coming. “Ok, here I go.” I walked up to the bus. “Ahh, you must be Katie! Welcome to Bus #9 of Bear Univeristy.” the bus driver said. “Yes, hello. It’s nice to meet you.” I said. “It’s nice to meet you, too!” said the bus driver. I was walking down the isle, looking at people. They were talking about me. “Who is that girl?” “Is she new or something?” “She’s a quiet, shy, nerdy newbie,” I heard Allyson say to her friend. I sat in a seat by myself. I started reading Twilight. I was still on Chapter 1. When the bus stopped, I quickly put back my Twilight book in my bookbag. “Ok Katie, you can do this,” I said. I walked into the school. I saw a lot of people. “Ok, my locker number is 246.” I looked at all the numbers and finally saw 246. I saw this guy next to my school. He was talking to Allyson. “See you after class.” said Allyson. “Um, hi. I’m Katie. I’m new here.” I said to the guy. “Hey. I’m Shane. It’s nice to meet you.” said Shane. “Yeah, it’s nice to meet you too.” I said as I looked and put my stuff into my locker. I put pictures of my BFFs back at my old school and I in my locker. The bell rang for homeroom. “Well, I’ll see you later.” said Shane. “Uhh, yeah. See you later.” I said. I was looking all over the school for my homeroom. After two minutes, I finally found it. My homeroom teacher’s name is Ms. Lays. “Hello! You must be Katie, the new girl.” said Ms. Lays. “Yes, I am.” I said. “Class, we have a new student who would be joining us. Her name is Katie.” said Ms. Lays. “Hi everyone,” I said with a little fake smile, waving a little.” No one answered. I saw that Shane and Allyson were in my class. Shane was smiling, but Allyson just rolled her eyes. “You sit right next to Allyson over there,” said Ms. Lays. “What?!” said Allyson. “I mean…. Hooray!” said Allyson in a quieter way. Ms. Lays handed me a reading book, spelling workbook, and a cursive workbook. I walked down to my desk. Shane’s desk was right in front of mine desk. I sat by the window and pencil shapener. Allyson walked by my desk and handed me a note. This is what I said.
Stay out of my stuff, never ask me anything, and never talk to me. And if you’re really smart, I have to copy off you’re paper because I don’t like doing work and I’m getting B’s in everything. ~Allyson
I was shocked about the last part. I’m never letting her copy off my paper and getting the credit. So, I continued working. When the bell rung. I took my books and went to Ms. Lays’ desk. “Ms. Lays, Allyson gave me this note.” I said as I handed her the note. “I’ll take care of this.” said Ms. Lays. “Thank you.” I said as I walked out the door.
Chapter 2
The New Diary
I was at my locker where I saw Shane talking to his friends. The bell rung for lunch. Today, we were having spagetti. It looked so good. I was trying to find a seat. “Where can I sit?,” I thought. I saw a chair next to Shane. I slowly walked up to him. “Um, hey Shane.” I said. “Oh, hey Katie,” said Shane.
“Um, can I sit here?”
“Sure!”
It was so nice of him to let me sit next to him. I felt something vibrating. My phone was still on. So, I quickly turned off. But when I looked up, Allyson took my seat. “Um, Allyson. I was going to sit there. Shane said I could,” I said. “Well too bad. Go sit at the table with no one there and you’ll make lots of friends,” Allyson said sacasticly. So, I just walked slowly to the table Allyson told me to sit at. Shane looked so angry at Allyson. I was at a table alone, crying. “I’ll never make friends now,” I said to myself.
I sat by myself on the bus again. Allyson walked by me, laughing. “Hey Katie. Want to go to the mall together? I think you need more fashionable stuff,” Allyson said laughing as she walked away. I just looked away. I was finishing reading my Twilight book. When the bus stopped at my bus stop, I got off the bus crying. Allyson saw me crying. “Oh, stop it you big cry baby. No wonder you’ll never get friends. You always cry,” Allyson said. “Just leave me alone Allyson,” I said walking to my house. I ran into my room crying. “I hate this school! I wish we never moved,” I said. But then, I saw something on my bed. It was a diary. It was pink and had sparkles on it. I saw a necklace came with it. It had hearts and stars on it. I saw a note on it. It said:
Dear Katie,
I went to the store today and I saw this diary that I thought you might like. I hope you can use it every day.
~Mom
It looked like a cool diary. I put it aside on my nightstand. After I did my homework, I quickly got on my computer so I could talk to my friends. My friends, Drew, Niki, Michelle, and Cameryn were online. I told them about my day. They felt very bad for me. ”Katie! Time for dinner,” my mom said. I told them I had to go eat dinner and told them goodbye. Today, we had vegetables. “So, how was school,” said my mom. “Today, I made 3 friends,” said my older sister, Vanessa. Vanessa is in high school in her second year. “That’s very good! How many friend did you make Katie,” asked my mom. “Um, none,” I said sadly. “Allyson, who is three houses away from us, she is so mean! She didn’t want to be my friend, she told me that I have to let her copy off my work because she doesn’t want to think, she stole the seat I was going to sit at at lunch, and she said my fashion taste is horriable,” I added. “It’s ok sweetie,” my mom said. “It takes time to make friends,” she added. “And she called me a cry baby and she said I’ll never make friends because I always cry.” I said. “Don’t listen to her. She’s just jealous that you’re new and she’s afraid that you’ll become more popular then her, so she’s trying to say those mean stuff so no one will be your friend,” said Vanessa. “And she’s wrong. Her idea will never work,” my dad added. “You’re not listening! Whatever she says is true! It’s always true,” I said as I ran to my room crying. I put on my pajamas and went to bed. “Katie, are you ok?” said Vanessa outside my room. “I’m fine! I need some sleep,” I said. I heard Vanessa walking back to her room.
The next day, the principal gave me a paper saying what activites I can sign up for. I chose to sign up for cheerleading and volleyball. The principal said I go to cheerleading Monday, Wednesday, and Friday. So today, I’m in volleyball for free period.
When I got there, I couldn’t believe it. Allyson was in volleyball. I felt like going away, but I had to stay. After three minutes, we started playing. On another side of the gym, the boys were playing basketball. I saw that Shane played basketball. “Ok, girls! It’s time to play,” said Allyson. All of Allyson’s friends were on her team. The “leftover girls,” including me, were on another team. Allyson served the ball. I didn’t get a chance to hit the ball at all, until I hit the ball on the ground on Allyson’s team. “Oh, it’s on Katie,” said Allyson. “Bring it,” I said. All the other girls sat on the bleachers to watch us. Allyson served the ball. I backed up to hit the ball. We were playing against each other for 5 minutes. I got really tired, but I never gave up. But for a minute, I felt like giving up, but I didn’t pay attention to the ball. Allyson hit the ball so hard on my head, I callasped. And after a minute, I fainted.
Chapter 3
The Weird Experience
“Look, she’s opening her eyes,” said Shane smiling as I was opening my eyes. “Whoa, what happened,” I said. I saw that Shanes towel was on my head. “You fainted. Let’s get you to the nurse to see if you’re ok,” said Shane as he reached out his hand to help me up. I took his hand and he pulled me up. We walked to the nurse’s office, but we were really quiet.
At lunch, I sat at the same empty table as yesterday. “Shane! Come sit here,” said Allyson. “I’m going to sit next to Katie,” said Shane as he walked away. “What!” said Allyson with a really angry face. “She is going to get it. I hope she has a horrable year here at Bear University and never comes here again. Then we will live happily ever after,” said Allyson as she smiled evily. I saw Shane come up to my table. “Hey Katie. Can I sit here,” asked Shane. “Oh, hey. Sure,” I said will a little smile.
“That was some fall you had today.”
“Oh, yeah. I was surprised at myself.”
“You feeling better yet?”
“Yeah. The nurse gave me a ice pack to put on my head as I layed down on a little bed they had for me.”
“Well, I’m glad you’re better. Um, can I have your phone number?”
“Sure!”
Shane? Am I really dreaming? Shane, the most popular guy in the school, asking for my phone number? I wrote down my phone number on a piece of notebook paper and Shane wrote down his number. We both gave each other our numbers at the same time. “Can’t wait to call you,” said Shane. “Me too,” I said will a smile. “So, now we’re friends, right,” I asked. “Yeah,” said Shane. “Oh, I ride your bus, but you’ve never seen me. I’ll save you a seat,” said Shane with a smile. “Oh, thanks,” I said. “I have a dentist appointment at 3:00 so I won’t be on the bus today,” Shane added. “Oh, ok.” I said.
“I’m home!” I said. I saw Vanessa in the living room watching TV. ”Did you make any friends,” Vanessa asked. “Yeah, it’s a boy named Shane. I got his phone number today. Speaking of that, I have to add him on my cell phone,” I said as I ran to my room. “That’s cool,” said Vanessa making sure I heard her. When I finished my homework, I got on the computer to talk to my friends. Michelle and Niki were online. “Hey Katie!” said Michelle and Niki at the same time. “Did you make any friends,” Niki asked. “Yes, a boy named Shane,” I said.
“That’s cool! Did you get his phone number,” asked Michelle.
“At lunch!” I said.
“BRB, I have to add his number on my cell phone.”
I was so excited to add Shane’s number to my cell phone. Michelle, Niki and I talked about for at least two hours. Suddenly, my phone rang. It was Shane! “Guys! Shane is on the phone! BRB,” I told my friends. I quickly answered the phone. “Hello,” I said. “Hey Katie! It’s Shane! Just added you to my contacts,” Shane said.
“So, what’s up?”
“Not much. I just had chicken for dinner.”
“That’s sound good!”
“Listen, my grade for math is kind of dropping, and the test is next Tuesday. Um, can I come over your house so you can help me study?”
I stood in silence. “Hold on Shane,” I said. I placed down my phone. I screamed and jumpped around all over my room. I quickly ran up to my mom. “Mom, today I made a friend named Shane. He said that his grade for math is kind of dropping and the test is next Tuesday. He asked can he come over,” I said. “Sure, sweetie! I’m glad you made a friend,” said my mom. “Oh, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you so much mom!” I said as I hugged my mom. I quickly ran back to my room to talk to Shane again. “My mom said you can come! What day and time,” I asked. “Saturday, 5pm?” asked Shane. “Sounds great!” I said. “Well, see you then!” said Shane. “Yeah, see ya!” I said as I hung up the phone. I quickly ran back to the computer to tell my friends. “Guys, Shane is coming over to my house so I can help him study for the math test!” I said.
“OMG! That’s awesome!” said Niki.
“Katie! Dinner time!” said my mom. “I have to go eat dinner now. I’ll tell you more about it later,” I said. We all said goodbye. I was so excited for Shane to come over!
Chapter 4
Getting Ready For A Day To Remember
I was getting on the bus with a smile. I went to see if Shane was on the bus. “Katie!” said Shane. Shane was in the back of the bus. “Hey Shane!” I said. “This is my friend Cameryn,” said Shane. “Hello! It’s nice to meet you,” said Cameryn. “Hello! You too. We’ll make great freinds!” I said. We started exchanging phoone numbers. “Oh Shane, my mom and dad has to go somewhere on Saturday, so my mom is going to make some snacks for us sitting on my kitchen table,” I said walking off the bus. “Oh. By the way, I can’t wait until Saturday,” said Shane. “Me too,” I said. I saw one of Allyson’s friends talking to another friend of Allyson. Their names were Mickayla and Angie. “We’ve got to tell Allyson what’s happening to Shane and Katie,” said Angie. Mickayla and Angie ran into the school.
“He what!” said Allyson furiously. “Yeah. Shane is going over to Katie’s house so Katie can help him study for the math test on Tuesday,” said Mickayla. “We heard it on the bus,” said Angie. ”Ok girls. Time for our plan,” said Allyson. “What plan,” asked Mickayla.” “Our plan to make sure Katie has a horrible year here,” said Allyson smiling evily.
Today for lunch was vegtables. I was walking up to a table where Shane and Cameryn. Allyson saw me walking up to Shane. “Ok, part one of our plan,” Allyson said smiling. She walked up to me. “Hi Katie,” said Allyson. She spilled her lunch all over me. “Oops. That’s what you get for hanging out with people that are popular. And you’re not popular!” said Allyson. “That was on purpose,” I said as I was mad. “So,” said Allyson. She took a bucket of salad dressing and poured it on my head, just as the principal came back. “Allyson! My office! Now!” said the principal. Allyson walked to the principal’s office as she was really mad. I got a wet towel to get off all the food and salad dressing off me. “Why would Allyson do that to you,” asked Shane. I don’t really want to talk about it.
I woke up the Saturday morning. “Finally! It’s Saturday!” I sad as I jumpped out of my bed. “Good morning Katie,” my mom as I walked in the the kitchen. “Hi mom. Where’s dad?” I said. “He’s still sleep. I’m going to make your snacks at 3pm. Vanessa is going to be here to make the stuff that had to be on the stove or in the oven. “Ok,” I said.
“Now, what should I wear,” I said looking through my closet. “I think I’m going to wear… this,” I said as I held up my pink spring shirt and my sparkly jean skirt. Then, I looked at my diary that was on my night stand. “Hmm, maybe I should write in it,” I said. This is what I wrote:
Saturday February 8th, 2009
Dear Diary,
I haven’t written in this diary for a while, but this is my first time writing in it! My name is Katie. I go to Bear University. There is this mean girl named Allyson, and a nice guy named Shane. Speaking of Shane, he’s coming over to my house for the first time ever! I’m going to help him study for the math test on Tuesday. I really hope this goes out well, because if it doesn’t, my whole life is ruined. Wish me luck!
Katie
It was 3:00pm right now. I’ve been chatting with my friends on the computer all day. My mom and dad said goodbye to me and Vanessa. Then, I continued chatting with my friends again.
Chapter 5
The Day To Remember
When six minutes after 5:00 passed, the doorbell rang. “I’ll get it!” I said. It was Shane. “Hi Shane.” I said as I opened the door. “Hey.” he said. “Come in.” I said as I went to the side of the door to let him in. “This is a nice house,” he said. “Oh, thanks,” I said with a smiled as I closed the door. “This is my older sister, Vanessa,” I said. Vanessa was on the couch reading Breaking Dawn of the Twilight Series. “Hello,” Shane said with a little wave. “Oh, hello,” said Vanessa with a smile. “Let’s get studing,” I said. Shane was looking around to see my room. “Ok,” he said as he held my hand and led me to my room. I could tell he was really excited for me to help him study. “Wow,” he said as he walked in my room. “Your room is pretty big,” he added. “Thanks,” I said as I walked up to him. I walked up to my bed and got out my books. “Peppermint?” I asked Shane as I held up a bag of peppermints. “Sure! I love peppermints,” he said.
Two and a half hours have passed by and we were on a last problem to practice. I gave Shane a division problem. He was writing down his work. I could tell he was really thinking. “Is this right?” he asked me as he gave me his paper. “That’s right,” I said as I smiled and gave him back his paper. “You’re ready,” I added as I continued to smile. I heard Vanessa going into her room. “I’ll be right back,” I said to Shane as I walked out of my room. “Ok,” he said. I went into Vanessa’s room. “What are you doing?” I asked her. “I’m about to get on the computer,” she said. “Ok,” I said. I walked back into my room and saw Shane looking at a picture of me riding a horse when I was little. I knocked on the door to get his attention and smiled. Shane jumped a little. “Oh, sorry,” he said. “It’s ok,” I said. “So, want to watch TV,” Shane asked. “Ok,” I said.
We were watching a lot of funny things on TV. We were laughing so hard, our faces were red like cherries. We had to drink water to calm us down. “Listen, the Valentine’s Day Dance is on Friday, and I need to learn how to dance,” he said. “Like, maybe The Waltz?” He added. “I took dancing lessons for The Waltz a few years ago,” I said with a smile. I took my music player and CD. “Let’s go,” I said to Shane, smiling. “Where are we going?” He said as he chuckled a little.
We walked up the stairs to The Roof Top. I was so excited to teach Shane how to dance. When we got up there, I placed down the music player and CD. “Ok. One thing I learned from my class is that if you dance to a song with words, singing the words may help you understand what your dancing to or the message of the song.” I said. “That’s good advice,” Shane said. “Have you ever seen High School Musical 3?” I asked. “I’ve seen it like fifty times,” he said with excitment. I turned on the song, Can I Have This Dance. “This is the perfect song to dance to,” I suggested. Shane looked like he agreed with me. I started singing along with the song. After I sang, Shane sang. We started dancing like in the movie. It felt like a fairy tale. I felt like I never wanted to stop dancing. After a while, it started to rain. Shane and I came in shock, but continued to dance. After the music stopped, I felt really happy. “Do you think I’m good?” Shane asked. “You’re great,” I said smiling. We ran back into the house quickly. I heard a car just as we went back in the house. It was Shane’s mom. “It was nice coming over,” he said as he got his backpack. “Thanks. See you at school on Monday,” I said smiling and waving. “Bye,” he said smiling and waving back. As he walked out the door, I looked out the window. I waved goodbye. He waved goodbye to me. I went to get a towel to dry my wet hair. “Did Shane leave?” Vanessa asked as I passed her room. “Yeah,” I answered. “How was it?” She asked me as I went into her room. “It was good,” I said. “I guess you have a best friend now,” said Vanessa winking at me. I winked at her back and left.
Chapter 6
Shane? My crush?!
It was Sunday morning, and I was still filled with joy after yesterday. But it still had me wondering why the most popular guy in school want to hang out with me. I looked over at my nightstand and looked at my diary. This called for a entry of a lifetime.
Sunday, February 9th, 2009
Dear Diary,
Yesterday was so amazing! I got to tutor Shane in math, we watched TV together and laughed like crazy, and the best thing of all, I got to dance with him! It’s almost as if.. I might have a crush on him. Wait, wait, wait, I promised myself when I moved here, I would not get to serious about a crush before I get to know him more. Well, we’ll see how it goes.
Katie
Just as I set my diary on my nightstand, my mom came into my room. “Sweetie, can you water the plants in front of the house for me?” “Sure,” I answered. I got out of my bed and went into the garage to find the watering can. The garage was so dark, I could barely see anything at all. I kneeled down to find the watering can by the garden stuff. “Katie! The watering can is on the shelf above the garden tools!” Startled by my mom’s voice, I hit my head on the shelf my mom was talking about. Ouch! I got the watering can and opened the garage door. While rubbing my hand on my head, I walked out of the garage. Well that was just great, I thought.
When I came outside, I heard Allyson giggling with Mickayla and Angie. I just looked at them for a second, and continued to walk to the plants. Just as I did that, I heard Allyson’s voice. “Hey Katie! Why are you rubbing your head? You lost your brain and you’re trying to find it?” Allyson, Angie, and Mickayla all started laughing. I looked back with a bored face ready to make my comeback. “No, I’m just thinking about when you will ever find yours.” I gave her a well-that’s-just-the-way-it-is face and continued to water the plants. All of them looked in shock, then Allyson just walked away looking really mad. That was awesome.
“Allyson, you can’t let newbies get to you,” Mickayla said. All of them went up to her room after I made Allyson mad. “Yeah, popular girls never let newbies get to them. Get your head in the game, Allyson,” Angie said. “Guys! Katie is not like any other newbie. I usually have newbies miserable for the whole year starting on their first day, but Katie is starting to like it here!” Allyson sounded mad and worried at the same time. It’s pretty obvious you know how that sounds. Just then, Allyson got her evil-idea face. “I know that face,” Angie said. “Guys,” Allyson started. “Doesn’t Katie have a crush on Shane?” Angie and Mickayla looked at each other with confused faces. “Well, who knows,” Mickayla answered. “Well,” Allyson said as she walked to the other side of her room by Mickayla and Angie. “We can’t let Katie be Shane’s girlfriend, now can we?” “Not at all,” Mickayla and Angie said together. “Well, I have the perfect plan to make Katie’s life miserable, starting off tomorrow, and the big finale at the Valentine’s Day Dance,” Allyson said. Angie and Mickayla smiled. “Now that’s the Allyson we know and love,” said Mickayla.
On Monday morning, I walked to the bus stop and saw Allyson. Oh great, I thought. “Oh, hey Katie!” She sounded happy to see me. Something was going on. I know it.
hi, can I write a story? I have an idea, LOL
LOL sure Roy!
This is such a cool blog!
ok, I might not finish it right away, so either devide it into chapters or wait until it’s all finished LOL. I will begin it in next post……-
name: The Unknown Island.
List of Characters:
Rold Gold the golden eagle: main character of story, is a really golden color, with a golden heart as well.
Jason Alexpanda the panda: Rold Gold’s best friend, named after an actor, and acts like him too. has a habbit of eating more than he should, and is fat because of it.
Mr ThreeHorn the triceratops: the grump of the island, often called Mr Grumpy Horns behind his back.
Crusoe the waterhorse: this seamonster is huge, some have seen him and most humans call him the Loch Ness Monster, or Nessie, for short, travels back and forth between the island and loch ness. only the animals truly know he exists.
Mr Beadle the beadle: owns the island exchange.
Jacob the Koala: is a friend of Rold Gold and Jason, enjoys putting on a chain and pretending to be Jacob Marley’s ghost.
Andrew the Apatosaurus: a friend of the three other friends, cheerful but serious at serious moments.
Majesty the redwinged black bird: a very calm friendly bird, but can lose his temper at Mr Threehorn sometimes.
Reepicheep the mouse: you don’t want to call this mouse cute, or he’l be at you with his sword! bold brave and strong, this tall mouse is much larger than most mice, and much more courageous, always wears a red feather on his head and sword at his side.
and many others among the island.
that’s all for now, I’ll start writing the actual story later, LOL, tell me what you think so far.
Awesome!
LOL thanks, I’ll try to do some more right now, as much as I can. if it’s cut off at a good place and it isn’t too short you could make it chaptor 1, LOL…here we go!
chapter 1
Rold Gold meets his first best friend.
Once there was an unknown island, some where in the ocean, no one knows about it, and maybe never will. and only animals live there, some normal, some thought to be extinct, some thought to be myths. and the most amazing thing of all, they could talk! often some of the birds or swimming creatures ventured into a place where people live, but they never spoke around humans. it was a large island, lots of forests, beautiful beach, and much fruit.
One day, Rold Gold the golden eagle landed in a nice patch of grass, when something moved in the bushes.
“what is it? the wind? an animal? I hope it’s a friend!” he said.
suddenly, out popped a rather chubby panda bear! he was quite short, and for some reason had cake crums on his mouth.
“hi!” said Rold Gold “who are you?”
“I’m Jason Alexpanda.” said the panda.
Rold Gold had to hold in a giggle.
“ha ha, I know, yes I am named after Jason Alleypander, or was he Jason Alleggssandra? or Jason Alexsteward?” said the panda, very confused.
“Jason Alexander?” suggested Rold Gold.
“that’s it!!!!” shouted Jason. “yeah my mom named me after him. I look like him, huh?”
“yup, you sure do!” laughed Rold Gold. “I’m Rold Gold.”
“are you a pretzel?” asked Jason.
“no silly!” laughed Rold Gold.
“I know, I was joking.” said Jason. “hey, wanna have a pie eating contest?”
“sure!” answered the eagle.
and together the two best friend walked happily off to have a pie eating contest.
ok that is chapter one, I’ll do chapter two next time, you can post it and the list of characters if you’d like, what do you think?
lol I put “the two best friend” by mistake, I meant “the two best friends” oops LOL
Kristin?
sorry if I’m at all pushy….but….I’m just wondering if you will be putting it on the front page or if it will just be in here?
whoaaaa roy that’s a great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I’m very lazy at story writing I just right once there was a sad little girl.she was very sad.one day she became sadder.then she ate a cookie.The end LOL that was short and boring
I’m JK I write good but not as good as you roy llol
lol thanks! I hope too write chaptor two soon! I love animals! every kind! ‘specially horses eagles pandas….ect…oh pretzels! I love all the animals! ha ha!
I think I’m going to write chaptor two now, LOL I have an idea!
Chaptor 2:
Jason’s Mother
The two friends soon learned more about each other. Rold Gold was 20 years old [if he was a human]. Jason was 48 years old. [if he was a human] he had no idea that his namesake was the same age. [LOL]
“hey Jason, why don’t we explore the island tomorrow? go on an adventure?” asked the eagle that night.
“sure! oh-that is, if my mom will let me.” said Jason.
“I thought you said you were 48 years old?” asked Rold Gold.
“I am, my Mom lives with me but my dad died two years ago.” said the panda.
“oh I’m sorry. well see you tomorrow!” said Rold Gold. they hugged and said goodnight.
next morning, Jason asked his mother if he could go.
“but honey, there might be panda eaters out there!” said his Mother.
“Mom! I’m 48 years old!” said Jason.
“I can’t lose you, sunshine of my existance! please don’t go, for my sake!” she said.
“good day Mother!” said Jason.
“what did you say?” asked his mom.
“I said good day Mother.” said the panda.
“…could you just repeat that one more time Sonny Boy?” she asked.
“I said good day Mother!” he answered.
she stared at him. then finally said. “well…the day has come at last…Sonny Boy doesn’t need me anymore.”
he stared at her.
“I guess I’m just the old tin can. go ahead, throw me in the trash stump! send me over the ocean! who cleaned your room? every night. [music starts and she sings] who made you chicken soup, when you came down with the flu? and scrubbed your teddyhumans till their blue? I see, you don’t need me. yes, it’s clear to see. a mother doesn’t matter anymore!” sang his mother.
Jason got a little nervous.
“who sold her bamboo lamp, so you could go to camp?”
“Momma..” said Jason guiltilly.
“and trudged 7 miles, to buy you candy from the candy store? you’re making me feel slain, my life has been in vain. a mother doesn’t matter anymore!”
Jason put his head against a tree and groaned.
“yes I feel better now” continued his mom.”here I am, on the banana express to the dump. the banana peel on that train. the monkey driving me down there.” she sang again” who gave up nights of rest, to rub vix on your chest?” she pulled his head against her. he struggled out of her grasp. “and stayed up listening as you snored? now I’m done, just go, have your fun! a mother doesn’t matter, yes, a mother doesn’t matter, oh a mother doesn’t matter anymoooooooorrrrrrrre!” she stood behind a bush and the singing and music stops.
Jason recovered. “good day Mother.”
“good day Sonny Boy.” she said from behind the bush.
Jason turned. “my name..is NOT..Sonny Boy!”
his mother peeked out from behind the bush. “good day…Jason.”
Jason calmed down. “good day Momma.” and he went off to find Rold Gold.
his mother shouted after him. “YOU’RE JUST LIKE MY OLD FRIEND! YOU’D MAKE FRIENDS WITH ANYONE!” and she stomped off.
what do you think? I got the song from a movie and changed and added some lines, LOL.
LOL Roy. That’s awesome!
thanks, LOL, I love telling stories! I’ll have to think of chaptor 3 now….hmmm…..LOL
Wow Roy, I just read that today! that’s purty awesome!
thanks!
wow how do you think of that? thats GREAT! how old are you to think of something like that? wow!
thanks! LOL I am going to write chaptor 3 now I think, sorry it’s been so long. I haven’t had much time for it. well, here we go…
chaptor 3
trouble on the docks
meanwhile, while Rold Gold and Jason set out on their journey, the English flag waved proudly over a dock far away in England. and 2 dogs, a German Shepherd and a Pemrboke Welsh Corgi, were walking to the edge of a dock…
“Thunderbolt are you really sure about this?” asked the short and rather stout corgi.
“of course I’m sure!” said Thunderbolt the german shepherd.
“but what if it drowns? or a shark eats the boat? are you completely SURE???!!!” asked the corgi, rather paranoid.
“yes, as sure as your name is Lil Lightning I’m sure!” said Thunderbolt,climbing into a boat.
“…well…..oh…alright…” said Lil Lightning nervoudly, and climbed in the boat.
“now let’s pretend we’re fishing, let’s catch a whale, what do you say sidekick?” asked Thunderbolt.
“I say I’m really nervoud about this…” he answered.
“look…a fish. I shall catch it and you can eat it, you love to eat, I know!” said Thunder.
Lightning licked his lips “sounds good to me!”
“yes….now…wait….now I….POUNCE!” he jumped and caught the fish. but what they didn’t know, the boat was untied. the pounce made the boat move a bit.
“Thunderbolt I just feel like something is wrong here…I think the boat just moved..” said Lightning.
“are you nuts? it’s tied up! it is alright!” he jumped back in with a big fish.
“dig in!” he said, and they ate the fish.
but just then, a wave came and the boat started sailing out.
“oh no…you were right! oh no! now we shall be lost at sea!!! no more Thunderbolt adventure hour! I’m ruined!!!!” cried Thunderbolt.
Lil Lightning was nervous too. “what if we don’t have any food? what if we can’t catch fish? I’m hungry!”
“you just ate most of the fish I caught!” said Thunderbolt.
they were frantic.
“quick paddle!” said Thunderbolt. he paddled but the waves were too strong, and Lil lightning’s arms were too short to reach the water.
just then a bag of Rold Gold pretzels floated by. Lightning jumped at it and got it and climbed back in the boat with help from Thunderbolt.
“there, now I’m taken care of….my favorite food, Rold Gold Pretzels! I’m just fine now.” said Lightning, laying on his back and eating pretzels lazily as Thunderbolt paddled like crazy without any results.
they sailed far into the ocean. Lil Lightning ran out of pretzels, because he ate every one in the bag, and that night he wished for more on a wishing star. [LOL]
“I’m so hungry Thunderbolt, can you catch a fish for us?” asked Lightning.
“oh go to sleep I’m too tired.” said Thunderbolt, half awake and half asleep.
“I cannot sleep with an empty stomach.” said Lightning.
“it’s not empty, you ate pretzels all day. now goodnight.” said Thunder.
“fine…fine…goodnight..” yawned Lil Lightning. and they fell asleep, where they were going was unknown, but they had no choice. so they just dreamed about being back home. Lightning dreamed of pretzels, Thunderbolt dreamed of being back home with his fans and Patch the dalmation puppy. and they drifted silently [except for their unsilent snoring] on into the great unknown….
ok, what do you think? LOL
Lol, it’s funny roy! fantasico!
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Ok well this is a story about me dogsitting. Some of it isn’t real. But 99% is!
It’s based on my life. there.
A heart of a 12 year old
I woke up one morning, looked at the clock, and noticed it was 9 AM. I was supposed to go up to my neighbors and check on a dog while they were out of town. I am a half hour late! well I get my coat on and slip on my slippers, and run up there! she was doing fine, she was excited to see me! I let her outside and noticed she just stood there. so I went outside and asked her if she wanted to play. She said yes in doggy talk- wags her tail and panths. So I ran with her in the snowy lawn, and chased her. Then she chased me. I ran faster, and 5 seconds later, i realize i am on the ground, on the ice, smack flat on my hands. i didn’t have any gloves on, and my hand was bleeding. I looked at Lucy, the dog, and realized she tripped me! I yelled at her. I went inside with her, and washed my hands in the kitchen sink. She was laying on the carpet, waiting for her belly to be rubbed. I looked at her in an angry way. I told her, “why did you trip me?” in a sad voice. She started crying, and I rubbed her belly. After 5 minutes, I told her sorry, and she forgot the whole thing! I was throwing her bone for her, and she would go get it and bring it back. I eventualy left. But I realized, I cannot be sassy at animals even if they don’t know what you are saying. They feel that you are getting after them.
Lol, that was based on a true story. Lol! And my appologize if I don’t have correct grammar in there!
Like it?
awesome story! dogs are so cute! wish I had one, LOL
Lol, well it’s a true story, so it isn’t that intresting, but still, glad you liked it lol!
Whoa That’s Long Did You Copy And Paste It?
Great story Kristin! what grade is it supposed to be?
Vanessafan101: I didn’t copy it. I wrote it all on here.
Queen: Probably 6th or 7th grade. I’m still thinking about it.
Acually, you can imagine which grade it is. It doesn’t really matter.
I like Katie’s Story! I saw it on BI, and then I saw the other part of ur siggi, and I wanted to see what it was, and I really like this!!!
oh.
great story! can’t wait for chaptor 2
Well The Kristen It’s Great Were Writing A Story In School I Have Already Done 4 Pages!
There’s A Boy Called Shane In My School But He Hates Me
ok I wrote chapter 4 of my story…..here it is…
chapter 4
the exploring of the island
back at the island, Rold Gold and Jason Alexpanda began their exploration of the island.
“so Rold Gold, how long have you been here?” asked Jason.
“a year or so, it’s great here.” he answered.
“wow, so you’re my island explorer guide right? ha ha!” said Jason.
“yup, I’ve seen a lot of the island, it’s quite a big island and- huh?! what’s that?” he said suddenly jumping.
the bushes were rustling. he leaned over and looked closely at the bush.
“who or what is there? are you a cake or an animal? friend or foe? can’t be a human could it?” asked Jason.
“no humans are on this island so don’t worry. don’t talk around humans BTW, it seems to make them crazy.” said Rold Gold.
“I won’t, anyways who goes there?” asked Jason.
“scrooooooooooooge!!!!!!!” said the thing in the bush.
“ahhhh!!! it’s Jacob Marley!!! ahhhhhh!!!” screamed Jason, going crazy, running in circles.
“..now that is how humans act if we talk…” said Gold.
“calm down Jason! there’s no such things as ghosts!”
Jason hid behind Rold Gold.
“Scroooooooo-” out came the thing in the bushes “-ge!” it was a koala. the koala looked at the hiding panda and the eagle
trying to calm the panda down.
“oh I’m sorry, did I scare you? I didn’t mean to!” said the koala.
“it’s alright, I’m Rold Gold, and this is Jason Alexpanda.” said the eagle.
“I’m Jacob!” said the koala.
“Jason thought you were Jacob Marley’s ghost.” said Rold Gold.
“well, I like to act like him sometimes, I have a pretend chain I put on to pretend I’m him.” laughed Jacob.
“come out Jason it’s a koala named Jacob!” said Rold Gold.
“are you sure…?” asked Jason nervously.
“sure as I have feathers!” said R.G.
“alright.” Jason stood up. “hello Jacob nice to meet you.”
“nice to meet you too.” they shook hands.
and so Jason Alexpanda and Rold Gold had a new friend, Jacob the koala, who joined their exploration.
new chaptor!
chaptor 5
A surprising divebombing feathered friend.
“so where are you two going?” asked Jacob.
“we are exploring the island, Jason is new here, so I’m showing him around.” said Rold Gold.
“cool! so off we go!” said Jacob, taking a stick and holding it up and down like a band leader.
“hold it, hold it!” said Jason.
Rold Gold and Jacob turned around, surprised. “what?!” they asked.
“let me eat something before we go. please.” said Jason, already on his way to a nearby apple tree.
Rold Gold and Jacob looked at each other, then back at the panda. “uhh…alright.” said Gold.
Jason ate and ate and ate. Rold Gold rested in a tree while waiting. he flew to another tree, but made sure he could still see Jacob and Jason.
just then he felt something hit him in the head.
“hey!” he said, rubbing his head against his shoulder and looking up and around, confused at what hit him. suddenly a black and reddish spot zoomed out of the sky and hit him in the head.
“ouch stop it!” said R.G. the black red thing dive bombed again.
“you’re on my property! don’t hurt my babies!” yelled the thing.
“who are you? and BTW I wouldn’t hurt any baby ever!” said Rold Gold.
“are you sure? can I really trust you? or is it a trick? Clarince the Condor got so close to my nest once! and he licked his lips at my babies! are you sure you aren’t like Clarince??!!!” asked the thing.
“I’m sure! as sure as you are a very fast divebomber I’m sure!” said Rold Gold.
“well, if my wife gets attacked she’ll blame me, but I’ll trust you.. alright.” said the thing, and the “thing” landed in the tree, it was a red winged blackbird. “the name’s Majesty, what’s yours?”
“Rold Gold, I’m a golden eagle and you’re a redwinged blackbird right?” said Rold Gold.
Majesty slapped himself in the head. “of course! I should’ve known! you’re a golden eagle! they’re always trustworthy with their answers!! I’m sorry, I’ve been such a pain in the head to you.”
“well, my head is a bit sore, don’t worry I’m being silly, it’s fine! I’ve been divebombed before!” said Rold Gold. “say, wanna meet my friends? we are exploring the island, wanna join?”
“well, I don’t know if it’s alright to leave the nest, I will be right back, got to check with Sweetie Pie.” said Majesty.
“who is Sweetie Pie?”
“my wife.” said Majesty, flying to his nest.
Rold Gold waited. soon Majesty was back with the news.
“I can come! she said yes, Uncle Bomber is staying, so he’ll take my place. he’s an expert at divebombing, so make sure he doesn’t think you’re an attacker!” said Majesty.
“alright, come on! follow me.” said Rold Gold, flying back to his friends.
meanwhile..
“Jason, save some for the rest of the animals that need apples!” yelled Jacob, who secretly was hungry for some apples.
“I’m sorry, I can’t help it, it takes a lot to fill me up.” said Jason, making an excuse for overeating.
“you ARE filled up! more than you should.” said Jacob, frustrated at not having anything to eat this morning. he didn’t get to eat breakfast yet.
Rold Gold flew in suddenly, almost landing on Jacob, who screamed. “hey guys!” said Rold Gold. “I’d like you to meet-”
“hey hey take it easy! I was almost eagle lunch there!!” said Jacob, frightened.
“oh sorry, I didn’t realise!” said R.G. “guys, I’d like you to meet Majesty, my new friend! he’s a redwinged blackbird.”
Majesty landed next to Rold Gold. “hello everyone nice to meet ya!” he said.
“hello!” said Jacob.
Jason didn’t answer.
Jacob looked up at the panda who was too-busy-eating-to-notice-anything, and cleared his throat loudly.
Jason looked down suddenly, and by mistake fell out of the tree. “oh sorry!”
“are you alright?” asked Rold Gold.
“yup, just fine! sorry, sometimes I get carried away when I eat! nice to meet you..er….what’s your name again?” asked Jason.
“Majesty.”
“hi Majesty! I’m Jason Alexpanda and this is Jacob.” said Jason, intruducing himself and the koala.
“nice to meet you!” said Majesty. “well are we going or what?!” he said. “on our way!” he flew off, followed by Rold Gold who soared after him, and Jason and Jacob followed on the ground. they’re journey began, for real this time. Jason had a full belly, and Jacob had a few apples, Rold Gold and Majesty were fine. they all went on their way.
so..what do you think?
That’s awesome, Roy! Keep writing!
thanks! LOL I love writing, it’s so fun!
That is BRILLIANT! some of the best work EVER! I like to write too i’ve written a couple stories, but that is GENIOUS! You should seriously think about publishing it! No joke! and if you EVER get a chance to in life, make an animated movie or a kid’s show about it!
I wish I could! LOL maybe someday I will.
you’d better! (sorry i dont mean to sound pushy LOL) you would be doing us a big favor if you did!
LOL
please write more!
I agree with my self! write more! LOL
LOL, I hope I can write more some time, I’ve just been a bit more busier than usual I guess. LOL
cant wait till chapter 6! its really good!
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Write chap 6
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um, when are you gonna make chapter 6? *rolls eyes*